Pitch peer feedback

You have clearly outlined the genre, style and plot within the first couple of sentences which is great because the viewer can immediately understand the type of film you are going to make. In addition to this, you have included and discussed the type of shots you are planning to use.

Suggestions I Have:
Your pitch could be even better if you could have filmed somewhere where there was better lighting, but apart from that, I think that you have included everything necessary in your pitch.

Questions to Think About:
Why will you be using these camera shots and angles in your movie? How do they help convey your genre?

PRESENTATION SKILLS
What Works Well:
The pitch was well paced and it sounded as if you had really thought about what you were going to say in your pitch. As your video was un-edited, it flowed well.

Suggestions I Have:
It could be even better if you had edited out the start, where you turn the camera on.